Saturday, June 30, 2018

First Poem By Pipi Comments

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FIRST POEM

Heavy clouds in the air
are drifting by languidly
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

First poem which you have written in 2016 with rich imagery is excellent poem. Heavy clouds in sky motivate mind. Too many tragedies provoke thought. But canvas is painted by deep and blue purple colours. Still we have to note words of wonderful nature. Everything should be done in love. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned..10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 June 2018

Pipi, such a well penned poem....10++++

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Thank you so much for your constant bless and support, Bernard. Also for the 10++++ God's Blessings too!

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