First Poem Comments

Havya, you can be proud of yourself and the inspiration you have taken from Vidi. May this love of poetry be passed on and I am sure you will write many more poems. May you and your poetic endeavours be blessed.

Well begining and a good introduction, Welcome to the world of poetry and go ahead and around, write whatever it may be impressed, inspired and disappointed, write for the beautiful winter valley and the grey sky, write the autumn colours and spring rains, and also don`t forget Our Own Tradition and Nature, and write for the victim children and moms, Happy students day wishes,10+++

Congratulations to Havya...and as for inspiration look around and you will find your mother, your archangel...and am sure ink flow out of your creative quill to create another gem of a poem!

Well Havya, that was a good start....I am sure that you will write more and improve with each poem that you pen....You are lucky as you can always learn a lot from your talented Mom as well. I wish you all the very best as you dive into the sea of poetry...

Well Dot, that piece is inspirational to read, and I hope you will improve by the day. I wish you all the best in your endeavours.

Kuttus... Here is the comments from sailal for you...mailed to me. You rock.. my dear... Catch these moments... Live with them.. At the same time... you have to improve step by step... You will sure to have pleasant time with your writings... Amma. Here the mail goes..... ------------------------ Vidya Ini premetante kavithakooti vayikanulla bhagyam undavumo.. Nice sequence...i liked it...seems like a poetic letter to a friend. Congratulations to Havya With warm regards Sailal ------------------------

hi havya...a good beginning to your poetic journey....I wish you all the best for the future...congrats.

Young Lady, I have just received your message! You have a capable mother to inspire & guide! And once you embark on this poetic flight, only Heaven is the limit! In your first para you have said it all! I couldn't agree with you more! Poetry today is losing its rhythm & rhyme! That's why at times I read Tennyson & Coleridge & Pope to stay in tune! Hoping to hear from you soon! -Raj Nandy 07 Nov 09

Fine expressions........sequence and communications are really good and you are going to be the one...........

_______________''Right now I have no clue____________________ _______________if ever I will write another''____________________ _____________________DOT HP____________________________ Hey Dot...do yourself a favour...have a clue, and write 'til your heart tells you to put your pen down...This is a fine ''first attempt'' at the Literary Arts, as well as placing a demonstrative stamp on the old cliche''Like Mother, Like Daughter''. Your choice to employ a couplet stanzaic structure works well here. Your mom is a fine scribe of the Written Word, and this innaugural sample of your own poetry tells me that literary talent roots deep in your family...A fine tributive, indeed, young missy, and i am quite confident that you have made your Mom proud! F j R

a poem dot from HP Dot to begin with...very sequential in its presentation...an attribute a poet must have...nicely narrative...congrats Havya...10

nice poem Havya. you are blessed to have such a gifted poet as your mom. i can see both of you share a unique bond of love, respect and frienndship. i see many more poems take shape from your heart and mind, for you write with honesty. love Mamta

lovely first poem..a very lively one too...you kept me engrossed through out...10