Monday, November 5, 2012

First Place Where I Meet My Beloved Comments

Rating: 4.8

Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
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Indrajeet Mishra
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Saheb Mohapatra 23 October 2014

a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.

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Rose Flores 29 November 2012

a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!

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Onyeme John 10 November 2012

That's a sweet memory on ink. Keep it up.

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Simon Odhiambo 10 November 2012

Very good and great thoughts...

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John Hayes 09 November 2012

True love and pure also, very nice!

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Payal Parande 09 November 2012

nice one...........i love it

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Ancita Michael 09 November 2012

very beautiful. thansk for sharing

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 November 2012

Thanks for your kind invite. A nice poem with beautiful thought. K eep writing. Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Ashmiya Thalvan 08 November 2012

GREAT imagination...keep on writingggg...4ever.....thnkzzz 4 the invitation......

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Sodoko Zavaki 08 November 2012

kewl. Thx for the invitation you sent me. This is a great poem with imaginary, good desribing words. I like it it's sweet =D

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Indira Babbellapati 08 November 2012

great teenage imagination...

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Kishor Sharma 08 November 2012

Beautiful poem. keep the fire burning.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 07 November 2012

great write.....so passionate expressions..........keep writing....

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Poetheart Morgan 07 November 2012

Beautiful and romantic bring me to the past! ! ! ! Great

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Yash Shinde 05 November 2012

wonderful description........great imagination and imagery............great and intense feelings..................lovely and beautiful write :)

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