Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
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a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!
Thanks for your kind invite. A nice poem with beautiful thought. K eep writing. Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan
GREAT imagination...keep on writingggg...4ever.....thnkzzz 4 the invitation......
kewl. Thx for the invitation you sent me. This is a great poem with imaginary, good desribing words. I like it it's sweet =D
great write.....so passionate expressions..........keep writing....
Beautiful and romantic bring me to the past! ! ! ! Great
wonderful description........great imagination and imagery............great and intense feelings..................lovely and beautiful write :)
a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.