Tuesday, September 2, 2014

First Phase Of Life Comments

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Some metaphors are outside
But inside its suffocation
Started as a lively cell
Carved the structure in persistence
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SALINI NAIR
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 04 September 2014

Learning ability from cradle to cradle love the poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. You have presented each steps beautifully, the life inside womb.. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2014

It's the grooming section of life There teaches the rhymes in order That melody in next phase Then to the world of wonders There take it as it comes! ! ! A philosophic poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 September 2014

Shaping of one's life since the time of conception very delicately penned.......well done Salini........very nice

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