Some metaphors are outside
But inside its suffocation
Started as a lively cell
Carved the structure in persistence
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Beautiful poem Salini. You have presented each steps beautifully, the life inside womb.. Loved reading it.
It's the grooming section of life There teaches the rhymes in order That melody in next phase Then to the world of wonders There take it as it comes! ! ! A philosophic poem.
Shaping of one's life since the time of conception very delicately penned.......well done Salini........very nice
Learning ability from cradle to cradle love the poem