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‘To pierce blue dusky skies.’ ~ Indeed a pair of loving eyes do so…eye-candy… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Thks Eyan, Thks for the enlightening message...........Really I did not understand it atfirst that the poem is about ADam and Eve...........nice........now I understand in full length...........It is an interesting idea and its a good piece

Nice....touching..........soft emotions flowing.............

first, i would like to say that the title is nice.i like it...the content is brief, poetic and lovely...so, girls play an important roles to men's lives...this poem is nicely done..