Monday, April 7, 2008

First Past The Post - The Grand National Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let’s bet on a horse
to finish the course.
Let’s win an amount,
to boost our account.
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2008

This had a similer pace to a horse-race, the words galloping in time with the subject Wonderful strength and imagery Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 07 April 2008

You took first place in this race Ernestine! Great read, you win the trophy - *10*! ! Best ishes! Friend Thad

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Andrew Blakemore 07 April 2008

I used to do horses but wasn't very good at betting so went into early retirement. This is a great, fast moving piece, only one winner- you. Andrew x

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

Great stuff again! I just wrote a poem with a similar rhyme scheme, allthough you may find the content decidingly less approvable!

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