Saturday, May 9, 2020

First Passion Comments

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Passionate love
pierces from within
like a sword of Hercules
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me poet yeps poet
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Anil Kumar Panda 09 May 2020

nice weaving of words to prove your point of taking birth and how life flows on afterwards. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'You call yourselves poets yet feel shy to accept the force both initially'.. is such a thought provoking stanza.10+++

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Vaibhav Simha 09 May 2020

A beautiful piece with a unique structure. The poet's flux of thought is the defining feature of his poetry.

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so kind of you V S I like your poetry too lets keep reading each other but some of mine may have more of you can avoid yet being young o poetic mate

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