First Passion Poem by me poet yeps poet

First Passion



Passionate love
pierces from within
like a sword of Hercules

and
when it penetrates

think of him/her
who accepts it as a sin

but

is happy really

as passion is love and lust
an admixture

you call yourselves poets
yet feel shy
to accept the force
both initially

before a child is created
and
when it forces itself

out of the tightest
darkened valley

makes any mom yell
and
the mountains echo

then suddenly subsides
The loudliness
into a mellow

no echo
smiles only
as the new born
criesfor milk

my mommy

she has a tear of joy

Saturday, May 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,child,joy,love and life,mom,moments,passion,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
READ IT SOFTLY SLOWLY
BUT LOUDLY

LET ALL ENJOY
NATURALITY

KINDLY
'tis passionate
ONLY
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 09 May 2020

nice weaving of words to prove your point of taking birth and how life flows on afterwards. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'You call yourselves poets yet feel shy to accept the force both initially'.. is such a thought provoking stanza.10+++

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Vaibhav Simha 09 May 2020

A beautiful piece with a unique structure. The poet's flux of thought is the defining feature of his poetry.

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so kind of you V S I like your poetry too lets keep reading each other but some of mine may have more of you can avoid yet being young o poetic mate

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