Passionate love
pierces from within
like a sword of Hercules
and
when it penetrates
think of him/her
who accepts it as a sin
but
is happy really
as passion is love and lust
an admixture
you call yourselves poets
yet feel shy
to accept the force
both initially
before a child is created
and
when it forces itself
out of the tightest
darkened valley
makes any mom yell
and
the mountains echo
then suddenly subsides
The loudliness
into a mellow
no echo
smiles only
as the new born
criesfor milk
my mommy
she has a tear of joy
A beautiful piece with a unique structure. The poet's flux of thought is the defining feature of his poetry.
so kind of you V S I like your poetry too lets keep reading each other but some of mine may have more of you can avoid yet being young o poetic mate
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice weaving of words to prove your point of taking birth and how life flows on afterwards. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'You call yourselves poets yet feel shy to accept the force both initially'.. is such a thought provoking stanza.10+++