Saturday, November 15, 2008

First Night Of Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smoke-tainted wind
brushes graceful fingers
through skeletons of leaves,
discussing the night in whispers
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Aaron Brown
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Aaron your poem has wonderful imagery and it is beautifully descriptive. It took me to another place in time. A ten vote from me. Karin Anderson

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Bonnie Collins 15 November 2008

Well written with so much imagery, it is penned so brillantly and flows very tranquil....Excelent... bonnie

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Wojja Fink 15 November 2008

Wonderful, thank you.........John

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Aaron Brown

Aaron Brown

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