Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, June 28, 2014

First Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I knew nothing about love
But strongly believed
In its origin
With feelings
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Re: First night (Score: 1) by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Saturday, June 28,2014 (18: 18: 49) You have movingly expressed the beauty, power, and irresistible nature of young love. Good work. ~b.b.w.

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Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Beautiful poem.. 12 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Nicely done John Roberts10 minutes ago Well written

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More or less good.... Charlie Avila18 minutes ago need to improve, I think.... Comment +1

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good becca tenney19 minutes ago i like the ending

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I knew nothing about love But strongly believed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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