Thursday, August 6, 2015

First Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

So naked I stood in front of you
Full of hope and full of fear

Locked in your arms I slept that night
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Joanna Pavlides
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Sekharan Pookkat 14 August 2015

nice narration and word choice

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Kim Barney 06 August 2015

Very nice, except that the very last word should be HEAL instead of HEEL.

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