Saturday, June 30, 2018

First Moments In Heaven Comments

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She has been 21 for too long
Her face hasn't changed since she was 16 years old, got a mind of an 80 years old woman
And a heart of un born child that got aborted on the 4th month of pregnancy,
She learned how to talk before she opened her eyes
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Soly Nasser
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 November 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Soly. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

This is such a brilliant poem about first day in heaven and love and affection of father and daughter in analysed well and presented with emotion...10

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Salma Nasser 30 June 2018

Your Comment just made me pen sweat to write more thank you :)

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