Monday, March 19, 2018

First Meeting With My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I came, stared at you silently
Smiling touched the wave of lips
Crimson lipstick hugged it fairly
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Rajnish Manga 25 July 2019

Exquisitely crafted poem of love with some most delicate expressions like - Touched the rose with wink band... Smiling touched the wave of lips... Staring, smiling, rose shaped love feeling and many more. Nice poetic feat.

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Nudershada Cabanes 19 March 2018

Wonderful description of first meeting of love.

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