Monday, November 5, 2018

First Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I am blind to you,
Still I can find you,
In colors I see you,
In fragrance I feel you,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Muzahidul Reza 20 November 2018

In colors I see you, In fragrance I feel you, I sweetness I taste you, ...... all these are the signs of love, well penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2018

need more You on that light on that darkness on that colors on that dimness on that word on that breath ...... need You more Till; until; no! but forever here and there need You more...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 November 2018

the beauty of love and god lies in its naturality in/thru NATURE god pleases there has been a long period of silence ' hope alls well sirji

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 November 2018

A powerful and beautiful poem that touches on one of the wonderful attributes of God; omnipresent. Yes, He.is everywhere. Another brilliant write.10

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Kostas Lagos 06 November 2018

Great poem Akhtar! Reminds me of sufi poetry

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 November 2018

Akhtar, such a lovely poem...............10+++++++++++++

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