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Sitting alone her memories unfold
Memories that made her smile;
That swayed her awhile
From today to yesterday, from present to past
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Good one....I love it...I love my grandma too...the depareted one gives pain
yeah...thanks for your words...i just tried to pour my feelings in words
I have been fortunate to enjoy the love of my grandmother for many years. Though she had more than two dozen grandchildren, I was her favourite...
Congratulations sir.. You are lucky enough to have spent much time with your grandmother
an excellent lover if only you could read my moms smiles equally beautiful
A great start with a nice poem, Ritika Deborah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Thank you so much sir. Please read my other poems too and give your valuable feedback
It's evident the you loved your grandmother very much. A wonderful write.
aaahhh....that's something new but thanks a ton for your appreciation :)
aaaahh....That's something new to know but really thanx for your appreciation
Lucid eyes like blue skies, hairs were snow white Soft as feather; deep and flowing like a river That was her granny, her first lover. Granny is a lover and a giver. thank u for this fine poem. endearing and spreading positive notions to the world........ we shall create a world of love.. tony
Thank you so much sir for your kind words. I need to learn more from your writings sir. I read your heart touching poetry on abortion..its just superb full of so much pain. Kindly keep reading my poetries further too. Regards Ritika
I am so overwhelmed by tour kind words ma'am. Thank you. Need your blessings and support as I write more
Beautiful and passionate tribute to a great grandmother, written from the heart. Thanks for sharing Deborah and do remain enriched.
This is a poetic piece of poetry. It is a brainchild of a creative mind. It is deep and greatly loaded with rhymes and rhythm. I love it.
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Today like a mournful yet satisfied soul Pondering over all that she took over Hours, years, seasons aside She kept her granny's teachings abide. She is a giver, she is a lover But incomplete without her first lover. She has whole, but she is not whole.. beautiful