' First Love ' [ Senryu ] Comments

Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

intense affection that woven by Cherubim beguiles, hurts and thrills awesome superb 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

A very intense love poem that's so mind provoking.

Hurts and thrills! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A delightful treatise on love... that which infects and affects the heart with true joy and pain... wonderfully penned dear poet.

A lovely haiku. Beautifully written.

One can't get rid of the first lovely memories, some smile on themselves and some on the lover, but a smile is always associated with the first love.

'Beguiles, hurts and thrills' RAB

Splendid and spectacular write...soothing for the eyes and mind..

‘hurts and thrills’…polarized in same canvas and simultaneously and beguiling me too …a poetic twist…push-pull in first love in vogue… …… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Fantastic and excellent with high speed etheral journey. Intense is the right word for a reaction to portrait. Regards, 10++ Apoet