First Love...One And Only Comments

Sailing in the same boat :) A person can only become a good poet if he has experienced pain in life. A great poem.

nice poem liked reading it

First love is folly as here one side infatuation alchemy worked… Had it been in synergy…in full one hundred present…separation is impossible… Here poet express jilts, spurns …and fifty percent [poet’s heart though he gave hindered] percent] of fiancée comes to zero percent…a nice poem on jilt 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

My heart is broken and it bleeds Crushed like our bedding reeds O’ why she whispered all those lies? O’ why can’t she hear my cries? Heart breaking sad story, sounds familiar to mine....never mind!

first love, is always one and only, in words and feelings.it is a extrordinary experiencein life.great poem. ritty

I would say Ishk say tabiyat nay zist ka maza paya. Dard ki dava paee dar e bedava paya. :)

some how no one can escape this............lovely write........

A broken heart, so sad and this poem so good. Ruthy

Losing a love is never easy. I enjoyed reading this piece. Well penned. xox Cherri

I felt your heart as I read...indeed a beautiful piece, thanx...

This is the fate of all first loves, friend, nice write.10