When i saw u for the first time
feelings were nothing but sublime
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it touched my soul...u hv a gr8 flair and art...keep up ur gr8 wrk
well...Ambika, you have a real poetic heart...melting lines through out the write...what to mention or which! i liked this write 10
a very very sweet poem ambika....but in my point of view....first love doesnt ALWAYS last...even though in some cases it does....first love is always intense and innocent....and very very true....but then, it doesnt last if the person we love doesnt respond the same way.....i feel that experiance love lasts longer....a better understanding will be there then.. anyways...a very good poem...