Tuesday, December 16, 2008

First Love Comments

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i crave your presence every minute
im awake. i thirst for you smile and
hunger for your touch, but i wonder
if you feel the same way?
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Shekhar Joshi 03 June 2009

mayb this is.....i don't know...haven't have any till now... enjoyed your poem... good one

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Paul Hansford 18 December 2008

I don't know about 'supposed to' but it does. See my '01-The First Time' for my own (distant but no less vivid) recollection of it.

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Haylee Nanez 16 December 2008

that was great.all the wonders left unanswered(sometimes) and yes.maybe it is.awesome poem- haylee :)

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