Monday, June 15, 2009

First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyone has a story about their first love so I’m sharing mine with you,
It doesn’t end happily but sadly not everyone’s first loves do.
So my story all started in June almost two years ago,
My friends introduced me to this boy that I didn’t know.
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 29 March 2020

Your knack for embellishing your writings with poetic rhyme and rhythm, is not only appropriate but also poetically remarkable. Really an insightful love poem with strong emotions.

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Hailey Agnew 18 July 2009

wow i know how heartbreak feels this poem is amazing its making me cry

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 14 July 2009

Wow, you really emptied your heart out, what a relief! That's the beauty of poetry. Good luck!

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Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

im sorri...this poem is makin me cry..no lie: -(

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Ahtivah Lawton 02 July 2009

everyone of ur poems is describing a situation in my life that i can realte toooo....crazziii

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Dislocated Heart 25 June 2009

wow........ I think everyone's first love seems this way... and I honestly think, that love once shared.. will always be there.. as hard as we can try to push away... Lovely story, :) Jc

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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