First Love... Comments

'I still remember the first smile on your face which gave my heart beat a sudden race' Rachel Ann Butler

I still remember the first smile on your face..... it is first sight love syndrome.. manyways to come across but beautiful expience in life.... good write...10

Yes first love is forever.good job.

A wonderful piece sweetly written. 10

......trully sweet piece.........................Winnie...

heh...sounds perfect for first love! ! ! Nia

short but compelling....full of love and compassion....if first ove is really unforgettable, then, so with your poetry......thanks for sharing all your amazing poems with us....poems worth to be cherished forever.....

our first love is hard on our heart wen it goes.... but just remember the true friends are always there for us. this real good. good job. Crystal

I think our first love is something special and one never to be forgotten, nice write Sebastine, 10 Lynda xx

nicee! ! she z lucky.. that she z not forgetten! !

memories and love are visceral, you capture both in this piece. writing is immortal, thus it is never forgotten.