Thursday, September 20, 2007

First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

POETRY my first love - my first child
I breathe, live nad love you mild and wild
Expression of myriad hues in myriad forms
Exposition of million thoughts in mighty norms
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 May 2009

Poetry is your first and last love- child. Very nice idea, nice is the body of the poem. My love with 10.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 August 2008

you dress up your first and last child very beautifully here...least to say more on the best presentation thus...10

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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