First Love Comments

I admit this story of make up life yet accepting first love. Nice

Thanks for the experience..

I stood, said goodbye, numb of all thoughts of love, but on leaving the hospice a youth took my hand. And with eyes full of tears I turned to the son of the man who had magic and sang in a band. An excellent poem portraying realities of life, pertaining love, pain and pleasure.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid khan

First love, a sweet memory, a nice pom, a work of art,11th rating of 10 from me.

Absolutely beautiful, goes to my faves. Wonderfully written. Draws the reader into such a sad and poignant tale where they feel the emotions there........10+++....

Beautiful sentiments, Ann, nicely expressed: the tenderness and passion of the past blended with the tension and tenderness of the present. :)

i feel the same way..amazing poem! ! beautiful write

This is a great one for sure. I'll say more in another message to you. GW62

My friend an extraordinary effort indeed! Vividly poignant. Thanks for sharing.

such a lovely penning......arousing myriads of emotions... 'good memories outlive those that cause pain'.........so true loved it will live by it tnx 4 sharing

A well written emotional poem and a joy to read, thank you.

A perfect recall of love memory, it vividly express the sentiments of lovers who once fell in love that did not last. Yet, though short true love had been shared and cherished. The poem is splendidly written to last a lifetime in the hearts of lovers. Thanks for sharing mam. Loved it! Highest marks.

Beautiful rhythm... it catches you up and carries you along in the flow of the character's emotion. Wonderful write, I enjoyed it immensely.

this one is full of scenery..i seemed to have watched a very nice movie reading through the lines...

Perfectly, beautifully, tragically penned. Rhyming scheme spot on. You should be proud of yourself for this one for sure. t x