First Love Comments

A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely work of art. Thanks for sharing, Riza.

I could stay for hours reading your work. You're very talented. Sending good wishes from California. 🌹

I do say from me stay away Running after a cloud I go ‘Cause of you fate denies me today In my veins is just winter and snow.... Beautifully written thanks

A beautiful poem indeed with sweet rhyming and flow. Thanks for sharing.