First Love Comments

A lovely poem.. lovely expression.. I loved this amazing piece..10

You work magic when creating a collage of different shades of nature. Thanks, Sumit. I quote: On the canvas of a serene nature / she puts brush stroke of pink colour. South wind is a seasonal fairy O my life, store moving scenes / keep them safe in a vault

Nice poem with an eye-catching beginning and end; middle part needs some more chiselling; congrats on being poet of the day!

Charming, delightful poem, wonderful images that lift the spirit. Thank you Sumit

A smiling sunflower and an yellow autumn both imply the richness and beauty of nature. Attuning with nature is the emotion of love. A very sweet poem! Congratulations!

'I smiled back at the happy face will she reciprocate the stare? '......lovely verse.

A very peaceful poem and gentle on the ear. Fully deserved poem of the day. Well written, Sumit,

I'm charmed by the smell rose and dazzled by the mood of flower. Well said!

Lovely poem flowing in serene beauty, rings ones heart. Memories of autumn spreading tastes of salt or sugar. Wonderful poem. Loved reading it. Congrats on member poem of the day.

O my life, store moving scenes, keep them safe in a vault when yellow autumn reigns in full taste all with sugar or salt. - - - Beautiful memories of love give us strength in life.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

a hauntingly beautiful poem full of human affections? ...........well written.

This is such a beautiful and sweet poem of love...really captivating thank you for this

With sugar or salt! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautifully written with great passion and precision. I was completely mesmerise by these words. Thank you! You've made my morning. Congratulation! ! !

Serene nature....reminds me of the song FIRST LOVE popularized by SEALS AND CROFTS... congrats on being chosen....

A beautiful poetry with great rhyming and flow. Keep inking such sweet poems.

Sumit, I think this is one of your best poems to date. Quite magical to both ear and eye. Well done. Tom Billsborough

O my life, store moving scenes, keep them safe in a vault when yellow autumn reigns in full taste all with sugar or salt. well written sumit. big 10 for you. Thanks.