Monday, September 21, 2015

First Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t know how I was created,
When I felt my existence I was not alone,
so many like me were floating with me,
in a thick ocean of pleasure.
...
Read full text

Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Valsa George 23 September 2015

You have beautifully described the development of a foetus from conception to birth! Also its landing in the loving warm hands of a mother! Mothers are just amazing and they need to be returned a lot of love! A lovely read!

0 0 Reply
Musawir Raakh 22 September 2015

LOVED IT, WHAT A GREAT TRIBUTE TO MOTHERS, I LOST OF PARENTS IN A HORRIBLE ACCIDENT ON 25 MARCH, IT REMINDED ME OF THEM

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2015

So nicely depicted the procreation of child and his or her love to mother. A great poem shared.......10

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2015

So nicely depicted the procreation of child and his or her love to mother. A gfreat poem shared.......10

0 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Akhtar. Thank you

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
Close
Error Success