Saturday, September 5, 2015

First Love Comments

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it was the year 2013
when i was in 11th grade
the unexpected girl i had ever seen
but she seemed familiar to me
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Dophala boy
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Phurpa Wangdi 08 September 2015

ahh..don't you worry, the first break up is bitter yet you will do just fine. a good write..nicely framed

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Nima Tshering 06 September 2015

wow Dophala Boy...its a nice poem...make sure you get the second one..best wishes from me

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Monica Morante 06 September 2015

Awww! Sweet darling! Don't worry, you'll find your soulmate! :) [3 greatly written btw. :)

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2015

The first love was a short but delightful phase of live which might also teach you a lesson or two on what life is. Such episodes make us emotionally strong and create an understanding of human behavior. However, I like this poem.

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 September 2015

you know, Dophala boy, it is called ''first love'' just because it's the first in a row.. be sure a 2nd will come.. and again.. and again.. - and how long will the row be depends on you.. mostly.. ;) therefore, look for another girl and keep on writing *.. ;) greetings from Italy

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