First Love Comments

Well written poem on first love good poem, I think if you spent your time commenting on what you read it will serve you better to be better kind regards.

wow, , , , , nicely expressed emotion of first love, , , , , it's from heart, keep it up

Paradise, a world that only you had made This that only appeared at your sight Through your eyes, I saw it all come to life.... Eventually that day you looked away So it vanished and never has it come back For you too have never looked back at me You have expressed the feeling of 'Love' beautifully.... really touched my heart...