Saturday, November 5, 2016
First Light To Keep Comments
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The first cut sharp and burning red,
don't edit away its fire
Keep the wound both fresh and raw,
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11/7/2025 9:21:02 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed this poem. Your couplets so carefully written and your meaning expressed in pithy fashion. The first four lines, I found so powerful and meaningful on multiple levels. You made me think about language and expression, the sunset, and cutting an incision. Don't temper the fire, keep it burning as long as possible. So well written.