First Light Comments

I can visualize this moment of sunrise and the poet who is easily inspired by the scenario to write the above poem in extreme excitement....a marvelous work Kumarmaniji....kudos

Who are you oh painter? How are you smiling? Under the beneath of cracked cloud, From whom you have got power? - - - - -An amazing picture of a blissful morning has been depicted through your words.Thanks for sharing.

The first ray of light paints the dark earth and sky! The gleaming patterns it paints are wonderful to behold! In your mind's lens, you have captured the scene....! A beautiful picture strengthens your description!

A nice imagery of words on the 'First Light' and a nice graphic too at the end.

" Smiley child of dawn" ! First Light of peace! ! Joy! Beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Great poem about first light.

good to read another of your poems inspired by a picture. Powerful alliteration in this one.