Tuesday, May 12, 2020

First Light Comments

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Who are you oh painter?
How are you smiling?
Under the beneath of cracked cloud,
From whom you have got power?
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2020

I can visualize this moment of sunrise and the poet who is easily inspired by the scenario to write the above poem in extreme excitement....a marvelous work Kumarmaniji....kudos

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2020

Who are you oh painter? How are you smiling? Under the beneath of cracked cloud, From whom you have got power? - - - - -An amazing picture of a blissful morning has been depicted through your words.Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 20 May 2020

The first ray of light paints the dark earth and sky! The gleaming patterns it paints are wonderful to behold! In your mind's lens, you have captured the scene....! A beautiful picture strengthens your description!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

A nice imagery of words on the 'First Light' and a nice graphic too at the end.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2020

" Smiley child of dawn" ! First Light of peace! ! Joy! Beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lamar Cole 12 May 2020

Great poem about first light.

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Douglas Scotney 12 May 2020

good to read another of your poems inspired by a picture. Powerful alliteration in this one.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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