Monday, April 28, 2008

###### First Kiss(For W) Comments

Rating: 3.1

She leans against
the window

to cool herself
...
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Dee Wright
COMMENTS
Original Unknown Girl 06 May 2008

Beautiful! You painted the picture perfectly. Lucky you... HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 03 May 2008

breathes upon the glass / to calm herself / & with a fingertip / writes: “Help! ”...i like this lines very much - they add a dose of suspense

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Jerry Hughes 29 April 2008

A sweet, naive, uncomplecated expression of young love. Bliss!

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