Tuesday, September 3, 2013

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a head on collision disaster
I was scared thinking if I mistakenly miss
A spot, your lips will be a gum, and I’ll bite them
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Katlego Rasegwete
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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2013

Wow! A very descriptive, juicy poem! First kisses are never forgotten: My first kiss with you Is a birth mark in my mind Can’t wipe it away...Wonderfully said! Yet there’s no school for kissing But that day I passed my lesson with flying colors Bravo! Bravo! Now all I am wishing for is Can that kiss be my morning snack every day? My night desert before I close my eyes all the time What a delightful morning snack and night dessert you could think of! The thought is contagious! 10/10. I have a poem titled 'French Kiss' that you may like to read and comment on.

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