Wednesday, August 26, 2009

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gifted are the eyes
to kiss the standing Lotus
in blush towards the radiant sun!
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lily peace lago every by to ph
COMMENTS
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 June 2010

Metaphorically you’ve expanded the horizon of ‘First Kiss’…by all and every limits…finally noetic kiss to beloved culminated in…and wonderful journey in the Kiss Bliss… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

the first kiss in everything is there to remain forever whether it's the first kiss of love or deceitfulness I don't care. Yeah, first kiss never dies, it lives forever. Nice one, love it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009

great feelings emitting this poem! I can say this poem has poemotharaputic content! excellent! 10+

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

A lovely and lively description of touch by nature and with lips and the expression is blissful to the individual, poet and the reader. Nice romanticism.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

is ever remain in me and in the long walk of life turning the pages the First Kiss always ever live in me............ romantic poem but what a way of putting it. i really liked it most....10 read mine watched helplessly...bright eyes..brown eyes

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Eyan Desir 27 August 2009

Very nice....well written I thought your first kiss passed a long time ago you should have written this poem 30 years ago haha good job..........

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Ejaz Khan 27 August 2009

Very romantic poem, depicting the emotions related to magical first kiss, I enjoyed each and every line of this write! Thanks for sharing!

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Sweet and wonderful poem Lago..enjoyed the images of that kisses which filled the earth with radiant rays which light every heart....

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Rakesh Bedi 27 August 2009

Very soft emotions you have projected, lago lago, and that too Beautifully!

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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