Gifted are the eyes
to kiss the standing Lotus
in blush towards the radiant sun!
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the first kiss in everything is there to remain forever whether it's the first kiss of love or deceitfulness I don't care. Yeah, first kiss never dies, it lives forever. Nice one, love it.
great feelings emitting this poem! I can say this poem has poemotharaputic content! excellent! 10+
A lovely and lively description of touch by nature and with lips and the expression is blissful to the individual, poet and the reader. Nice romanticism.
is ever remain in me and in the long walk of life turning the pages the First Kiss always ever live in me............ romantic poem but what a way of putting it. i really liked it most....10 read mine watched helplessly...bright eyes..brown eyes
Very nice....well written I thought your first kiss passed a long time ago you should have written this poem 30 years ago haha good job..........
Very romantic poem, depicting the emotions related to magical first kiss, I enjoyed each and every line of this write! Thanks for sharing!
Sweet and wonderful poem Lago..enjoyed the images of that kisses which filled the earth with radiant rays which light every heart....
Very soft emotions you have projected, lago lago, and that too Beautifully!
Metaphorically you’ve expanded the horizon of ‘First Kiss’…by all and every limits…finally noetic kiss to beloved culminated in…and wonderful journey in the Kiss Bliss… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10