Monday, February 11, 2008

First Kiss Comments

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(Childhood Humor)

I was 8, she nearly 10
I always liked older girls
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Ray Lucero
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Ray Lucero 11 February 2008

Adria, Not scorned. I write about a lot of serious poems. Just wanted to write something humorous. So you did not find it funny? Do I need to do a rewrite? Just kidding...

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