Friday, November 17, 2006

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Closed eyes can see,
lips upon lips.
Thoughts empty of resistence,
bodies filled with urgency.
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Shelly Price
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Anneleen Hendrickx 05 March 2017

Beautiful poem laying bare the passion behind the kiss. Wonderful.

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Barry A. Lanier 01 March 2009

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Barry A. Lanier 01 March 2009

Honey, , , , come here right now, , , , No, and can't get away from the computer right now....Hurry....I need a Viagra!

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Anthony Edmond John 28 July 2008

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Howard Johnson 17 November 2006

What about me? ? ? , Just click on my name and you can send to me through P.H.. The last line sent me back a little, the direction I thought it was going was about long time passionate lovers.Nice, Shelly. :)

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adil Khan 17 November 2006

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Shelly Price

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