Wednesday, August 14, 2013

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.0

Ninth grade
14 years old
In a cold, public library
You were calm
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Lauren C
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Khairul Ahsan 15 August 2013

The first kiss is unforgettable. You have written a good poem on your first kiss. Well done.

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Urshula Davis 14 August 2013

Imagery banging! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This was a great read.

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Lauren C 14 August 2013

There was a boy behind...Thank you

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

detail of imagery make me felt my first kiss nice poem

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