Monday, March 8, 2010

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

it was like the fourth of july
with lights and sparks
as your lips touched mine
and we touched hearts
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patrick o'shaughnessy
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Marissa Garcia 27 May 2010

I think it is so reality for some first kiss! Amazing! I love it!

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Iron Panda 23™ 26 April 2010

this i likes alot (:

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The Devils Girl 22 April 2010

this is such a meaningful poem that it is so good

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patrick o'shaughnessy

patrick o'shaughnessy

merced california
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