First Kiss Comments

Lovely poem! The feelings are so real! Thanks.

All the feelings 1 feels falling in love the 1st time love it

You paint a very intimate picture, and the ending is brilliant but I love the uniqueness of this line...Maybe you are mine and maybe we'll be plural over time a great play of words :)

my hopes, my fears, fears does not flow. Nice sentimental short poem.

The kiss that time forget. Awesome!

Lovely poem, I love it, steal that kiss

Wow, such a dainty piece, romance emerged intensively at the end of the poem 'I want you, shall i steel a kiss? ' when in love, we would have the feelings that the person we hold is a creature belong to heavens but not us, you described these feelings through those carefully chosed words, very successfully.

Go ahead and steal that kiss. What's stopping you? Be bold, or be left in the cold.

Advise = Last night I eager fell asleep, longing to meet you in the morning again. I awoke to birds chirping and leaves rustling in the wind. You were still asleep. I watched you for a moment, hoping your eyes would open, so we could meet. I watched on whilst my heart was pounding, sinking, thinking... You are my clarity, my life, my hopes, my fears, my infinity. Before you arrived I was carefree and happy and now...your interference has left the moment, hoping your eyes would open, so we could meet. ....and now the water muddied by your interference

stolen kisses turns to sleep

Love this one! The thoughts that overwhelm you yet when you think back these are those perfect moments or memories and all this worry about what's to come next has got your mind at 100 mph. Perfect poem of fear in love and romance.

I like this one. It's honest and a bit raw, maybe even a little dramatic.

A woman, would probably most definitely want to be awakened by a stolen kiss, however I can sense the feeling of hesitance from the kisser. Why? ? What deep feeling is telling the kisser not to? ? That is what makes this poem so enjoyable to me.

Very deep with emotions on what one feels for the first time the kiss someone I absolutely love you poems and admire you as a poet

Such beautiful and amazing imagery you paint here, soft and gentle looking at the one you love. You brought me into this poem and I can see it all vividly. Thank you for this beauty Jeremy.....

Still and quiet moment being spent with your love, longing to wake, touch or kiss her. Maybe all three, yet she still sleeps unaware of your love's attentiveness. So very real and genuine, many of us have felt and wanted to do this exact same thing. Love is a wonderful aphrodisiac, isn't it? Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

You have created a wonderful imagery for the need to touch love. There she is sleeping serenely and dare not disturb her with a kiss. A beautiful portrayal of your love. Great expression!

this poem is beautiful. I can feel the stillness of the night, the early morning and the only thing that stired was a loving heart in your poem. Nhat thuy Vi

I love this poem, it speaks to the heart!

Restless night of a lover wonderfully restored in a poem.