First Frost Comments

I am always nostalgic when I think of frost. Your last lines are superb. Beautiful work. I like this one very much. Warmest regards, Sandra

Loved this one. Really entertaining..

Pablo, A poem with some very fresh stuff in it. In particular I like these lines: 'the ink of night' 'barn the roan while this land lodges under shrouds of crystalline' A very lovely piece of work that takes us to a distant place. It is very hard to do more. Blessings, Bill Grace

Very nicly written about the comming of another season, I enjoyed the constuction of your words, and the imagery was so vivid....

very nice and clean write...thanks for sharing

Warming and sensual great write 10+

I enjoyed reading this poem, good imagery. Jim

Other than feeling that this poem is about the coming of winter, I am left standing outside once again, Pablo. Though your words are expressive, and generally related to the cold and pains winter brings, there seemed to be resignation rather than emotion in this poem. It just didn't communicate that to me. Carl.

Our imagination takes us places we could never know in real life & this poem was the medium. Another remarkable piece of art. Thanks again

Keeps the interest alive in a heavy composition. Very nice, Pablo.10

Very beautiful - really enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx

Consistently enjoyable work Pablo.....! ! !

I think of the aging done by one still bristling within with fire and embers burning. And a repeated frost to bare it's head on one who recognizes the signs of aging. That's only one of several images I get from this wonderfully written poem. Congratulations!

This poem really has a gentle flowing pace filled with the personification and metaphors that you employed to give this reader almost a melancholy and serene vision like sitting by the fire inder a blanket waiting on the cold forst to come yet enjoying every minute in anticipation

First front in the morning light great! great! poem.........Full of hope, well written heartwarming piece woven with words of wisdom.........10+++

brilliant piece sir...I loved it..10

great and bringer of hope piece.

lovely the first frost is a clear ending of sorts, but its also a beginning. More than any other natural event, its an edge or dividing time that we can record each year as a point of reference. In New England the killing frost ---is the one that turns the last vulnerable plants to seaweed. nice write dear Pablo. Thanks for sharing +++++10 anjali

I love the imagery and the soft travel of the words.

very nicely written really enjoyed it. you have the magical power to take the reader with you inside your lines and in your themes. well done thanks for sharing.