Carola Hume

Carola Hume

Germany, migrated to Australia as a child
Sunday, March 3, 2019

✈️ ~ First Flying Lesson ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking at the sunny and cloudless sky,
High up a small white aeroplane flies by.
My heart has this feeling of yearning to fly,
What would it be like, h'mm I wonder now..?
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Carola Hume
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Debby Bka Sassy Pizzo 17 March 2019

What a thrilling & detailed write! I felt like I was beside you the entire way! Thank you for sharing this special experience :)

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Carola Hume 17 March 2019

thank you for your kind comments, & glad you enjoyed the ride!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2019

My heart has this feeling of yearning to fly What would it be like, h'mm I wonder now..? Engine shutdown, what a high I'm feeling! Soon I'll do it again. i quaoted the first and the last line of your poem. reading you i really wanted to fly to experience the excitement u had..... lovely poem. thank u. tony

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Carola Hume 04 March 2019

thank you for reading & commenting dr. tony. why don't you find the nearest flying school to your location, and for your next birthday treat yourself to a Trial Instructional Flight so you too can experience a flying lesson.phone them up & find out what a one time lesson will cost per hour. cheerio carola i'll go & check out your poet's page & read another of your poems cheerio carola

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 March 2019

Write comment. An amazing experience of the first flight, Dear Poetess. I really enjoyed it. You may like to read my ars poetica named, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

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Dipak Adhya 03 March 2019

Very good and well thought provoking poem .

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Gajanan Mishra 03 March 2019

Incremental gaps, good one

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Carola Hume

Carola Hume

Germany, migrated to Australia as a child
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