First Flower Of The Springs Comments

Birth is a spring of life and with every spring it brings hope to life. A sad but hopeful poem pn the realities of life where ordinary people are pawns to a political games of politicians. An enlightening poem on the plight of ethnic people suffering under such condition.10

God helps the helpless just a trust is required A heavenly smile follows the earthly tears............... When we are in utter helplessness, surely God will come to our aid! After all the commotion and agitation, a beautiful bloom was born as a bundle of joy and how well you have narrated the whole story! A 10

Excellent poem! .....Happily they came back with a cute pink bud/With a delicate hope in arms, no more frustration! beautiful expression! Nice photography! .........10

Exceptional poem. A favorite and into my Poem List.

This piece also vividly portrays the despicable acts of.politicians: the imposition of curfew is a manifestation of curtailment of freedom and the unfair treatment of ethnic group. An excellent depiction of the evils perpetrated by men who were supposed to be the protectors of the people.

A powerful political write that bites at the injustices of politicians and government authorities with a hope at the end brought about by the birth of a beautiful child. This piece depicts excellently the harsh realities of life, the taking of.lives and.tamed by the bringing in of another life. Very touching piece with great depth.

A wonderful write, liked it.