Wednesday, March 21, 2007

First Flinch From Wincing Comments

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Running away from the right thing to do,
When the wrong thing has found acceptance...
Just delays those installment payments of blood.
Pretending not to see what is obvious,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 22 March 2007

Likewise I'll love to share with friends this poem of yours clearly observed in its message as concise in its form.

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All which is promlematic, and is not addressed as seeds Will surely manifest as poison growth with problem needs L.S.>>>Words of wisdom from a pen that flows so weetly..Solid succinct quilling! F.J.R.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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