Friday, January 6, 2006

First Flight Comments

Rating: 4.5

Timid as a moth
my willing wings embrace
the hollow of her love;
dark on the sheet her face.
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Martin A. Ramos
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kskdnj sajn 31 January 2006

An excellent poem of love in the moment. Really enjoyed, and skillfully written. Angie :)

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Miranda Coffey 08 January 2006

this is utterly beautiful. i love it. ~miranda

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Martin A. Ramos

Martin A. Ramos

Mayagüez, PR
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