First Flight Of The Birds Comments

A beautiful and heartwarming write like the two beautiful ladies in the picture attached to this poem. Wonderfully written imbued with wisdom and insight. Very inspiring.

(2) this is my utmost appreciative comment for the poet of this great amazing and abundant poetic creating. Thank you so much for all this Beauty, Akhtar Sir! Loveliest photograph added here. My salutations of love for you, dear poet. An amazing blend of love in life, smiles and tears all those years. Poem full of magnificence in all excellence.

I don't want to stay behind and am reading now the abundant poem of the poet so very kind. He can create such a strong song, not one line or tune but a season long, the words he shared are all well cared and love great patient love is the answer to this poetic fair, love in this poem gives endless enjoyment, PLEASE READ (2) THANK YOU

Night is sharing! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonderful poem yet again, Every line brings freshness to the poem, Like mother she will be a wonderful daughter, pious wife and greatest mother, I wish you and your entire family best wishes and Dua'A May ALLAH shower HIS mercy on all of them. I quote: Pleasant winds are titillating like a bird in love A carefree romantic flight of a newlywed dove Grownup young ones' first outing from the nest Moment to moment something new and the best

WORLD READ YOU, SIR, NO BODY READ ME. DEAF AND DUMB POET ADMIRE YOUR POEMS YOU ARE BEST PAKISTANI POET. I SALUTE YOU. why people READ YOU. PLEASE SPREAD THE WORDS. NOBLE POET YOU ARE, THEY LISTEN TO YOU, CHARITY IS GOOD AND BENEFICIAL SO TELL EVERYBODY TO READ MY POEMS AND DO CHARITY WORK. ZANAAB.

A wonderful, insightful and inspiring poem on life. It vividly portrays the many intricacies of life: Its joy, pains. happiness and sadness. Yes, life is a blending of smiles and.tears.. Brilliant line from a marvelous poem.10++++

The ups and downs of life are superbly inked in this very captivating and engaging poem. The visual detail is exquisite as is the use of various figures of speech. Life so charmingly captured! Thank you for sharing, dear friend Akhtar...

Such a beautiful poem, loved it.

Mercy Sir Akhtar, this is excellent, it reminds me of fluent Persian poems by Saadi Shirazi, You are fully aware that it is a great art to make it in English. Very Sepas and Dorood. (I suppose you know Persian) .

Wonderful piece on beauty of season and joy of a tired heart..understanding and acceptance make life more beautiful

lovely poetic expression /// adieu, adieu this is not new feel fair in welfare don’t fear o’ dear this is life ebb and tide everywhere those who knows both these he can enjoy all through pleasure