Tuesday, November 5, 2019

First Fall First Rise Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Long brown, silky and perfumed,
An electrical wire with a current induced,
A hair I see, whose it can be?
With the seeds of a fruit beneath a tree,
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Akhtar Jawad
hair kiss
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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2019

Such a nice poem that makes an interesting reading. Thanks for posting.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 November 2019

a hairy fairy poemy ja ji where did the hair come at the kiss oooo now this dull pp me also sees hera pheri

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2019

A lovely poem sir! Beautifully expressed.....10

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C F 06 November 2019

Quite imaginative... well written.10+

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 November 2019

Flowing beauty a poem to remember long.

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Chima Ononogbu 05 November 2019

A poem well decorated with deep thoughts and imagination.

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
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