First Experience Of Sex Comments

look in the box above your poem, Akhtar. you wrote something about your use of the word vortex, but i can't see the end of what you wrote. ? maybe it could be added to your Poet's Note? it could. bri :)

It's a very interesting poem...homosexuality, from a humanist point of view, must not really be looked at as a vice... it is just somone'e preference...there are so many other wonderful qualities to be explored in a human being and what they do with their private parts should not really matter much.

very interesting poem gives one something to think about for sure.

Dear Bro, Nicely composed. Thank for you Kind comments.

Very interesting and thought provoking one, thanks for sharing