Tuesday, March 1, 2016

First Day Of Spring (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0


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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 June 2022

It's a brilliant haiku.....loved it. Top score!

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2018

this is spring- advance welcome feeling

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2018

Touching expression has been made on spring. Lovely haiku.

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Rajesh Thankappan 07 March 2016

The leaf is first plucked by the wind and again with the help of the wind it takes flight. Lovely imagery.

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In place of dry leaf I see the real soul departing from the body and the poem so beautiful in imagination.

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