Friday, May 30, 2008

First Day Of School Comments

Rating: 3.8

early in the morning,
school is calling,
time to hop out of bed,
jump on mum,
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Holly Elizabeth
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 22 February 2015

A good poem and the image of a school going child and busy engagement is shown in it. nice write up.

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2008

This is a chirpy little number with a bouncing sort of rhythm and an obvious love of words. May school continue to enchant you. You certainly have a talent for writing which should be encouraged. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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ngaio beck 30 May 2008

Written with great exuberance.May you always be as happy with school.

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