Wednesday, July 20, 2005

First Day In School Comments

Rating: 3.5

I am as invisible as the wind...
no one knows me but they know i'm around...
they don't talk to me, they'd rather look at the ground...
soo i'm the outcast of the class...
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Leonard Lee
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Greenwolfe 1962 11 August 2008

This was well described. I was thinking the same things on my first day of school as well. How easily we forget those days, and just put them away! Good stuff to read. I recommend it. GW62

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Lara W.a 24 July 2005

Ahh Leo! I've wished for invisibility too~! Nicely penned =)

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Anong All 20 July 2005

Nicely wrote poem, and the message, seems to be, quite clear.

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Leonard Lee

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