Tuesday, May 10, 2011

First Date Comments

Rating: 5.0

you got your tongue to the frozen pole
stuck on that love fix
a lizard in fishnets
you shiver when broke
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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